Keep Your Eye on the Baal by dinkydow


Chapter Fourteen

The world stuttered back to life as Jack's cheek slid across the grit-covered stone of the floor. His warning still rang in the air above him and was accentuated by another energy blast that took out a portion of the wall beside him.

Jack rocketed to his feet and sidestepped the falling wreckage, only to lose the rhythm of his steps, his naked feet sliding in the scattered wreckage. He staggered and just failed to catch himself, then tumbled into a heap on the floor. The shadow he'd glimpsed earlier jarred into his side, all churning legs and arms.

"Jackie, come back!"

The sound of Sam's voice jerked his eyes to her, that action was followed almost immediately by another blast, this one slammed into him. Sam's scream froze him into inaction for a split second. The total lack of pain confused Jack's already addled brain. A chunk of debris had felled him, and his head throbbed. The cool trail down the back of his neck told him of the blood that dripped from the point of impact. But that was the only place he hurt.

Jack's sense of smell drew him back to what - or rather who - had slammed into him - Jackie. Yet the all too-well-remembered smell of burnt flesh set off an adrenaline flood, and with it came an absolute certainty of what had happened. His world snapped into a cold and crystalline place, a place he'd rather not be.

As if viewing a movie, he saw and heard Sam scrabble to her feet, screaming Jackie's name. Dispassionately, he watched as his own hands tugged at the warm bundle sagged against him and turned her pale face to the light.

But it felt so unreal, this could not be happening, he argued with himself. Not again. Only a cruel and hardhearted God would impose such a horror upon any one person more than one time - would visit the sins of the father upon an innocent son - or daughter.

Jack had been raised to believe in a merciful and all-knowing God by the oft-times not so tender ministrations of the nuns at the local Catholic Church. The lessons he'd memorized from the Baltimore Catechism did not begin to cover the tragedies of his life, nor what his country asked him to do in the name of freedom. Each event eroded the faith that had flickered within. Charlie's death had snuffed it out - he thought.

Perhaps it was easier to feel anger toward an alien in human clothing than at the God of his fathers. His mind shied away from the root of his anger, at the many disappointments and his perceived abandonment, at why any God would allow an innocent to die or tolerate the sacrifice that Jackie had made for him - him . . . an altogether most unworthy vessel for such an act of heroism and love.

The unmoving child in his arms must be part of a dream of nightmarish proportions, and soon he would awaken from it safe in his own bed at his home, his arms wrapped around Sam's warm body. But he didn't wake up, and the nightmare continued despite his protestations that it had gone on long enough - that it was too much - that it must stop.

He felt the sharp jar as Sam used him as a stop to her momentum and with a savage effort; he wrenched his mind away from the existential bent of his thoughts back to the here and now. Sam's arms reached for the child splayed next to him, she tenderly pulled Jackie away to cradle against her chest. Stunned, Jack snuggled down next to her, one arm around Sam's waist as, together, their hands gently arranged their child's lower body and legs across their own.

Up close, he could see Jackie's injuries and it didn't look good for her chances of survival, he's seen grown men die of less. Her abdomen was a mass of charred flesh that smoked and smoldered, faintly hissing as warm blood cooled the wound. Jack swallowed hard as tears threatened to spill from his eyes.

"Sam?" the name wafted from Jackie's lips, a mere whisper but her parents heard it nonetheless.

"I'm here, Jackie," Sam replied as tears flowed down her cheeks and dripped onto Jackie's upturned face.

"Sah-ree," Jackie said and frowned.

"Why?" Sam voice trembled with suppressed grief and shock, her eyes met Jack's and he could only stare hollowly back.

"Hurt you." Jackie breathed softly, one forefinger pointed upward as her hands rested on her chest.

"No, you didn't hurt us, we love you, Jackie." Sam looked to Jack for confirmation and he numbly nodded his approval. "We're sorry you got hurt."

"Dying?" Jackie's dark-brown eyes bored into Sam's eyes and his own.

"No," Jack's mouth formed the word that Sam spoke; he could utter his denial, but could not speak the lie. Sam sniffed and shook her head violently in denial. "I'll get you some help from the Asgard."

"No," a minute shake of the child's head forced them to face her reality.

Jack shook his head. "No, Jackie . . . stay with us." His eyes widened as the girl's fingers reached toward his lips, but did not quite touch. "Please?" he whispered as her arm flopped back and he reached out to cup her face and stroked her cheek with his thumb. If he wished hard enough, and denied what he saw . . . perhaps, just perhaps . . .

"See . . . my sisters," Jackie whispered with a hint of a smile. Jack squeezed his eyes tightly closed for just a moment, and prayed they'd wake up from this nightmare. Sam's anguished gasp had them flying open in alarm.

Jackie's eyes widened and she gave one last gasp. Then her body relaxed as her final breath rattled out of her throat. The spark of life gradually left her dark eyes leaving them dull and lifeless as they stared off into oblivion.

Their tragic and profoundly private Pieta-like tableau was shattered by a bass voice above them. "The girl is dead?" Baal nodded forbiddingly. "Pity, I shall have to put her in the sarcophagus . . . or create another. Bring them." And he turned to leave.

Baal's grotesque intrusion was like a sharp stick thrust into an unsuspecting beehive, and in an instant Jack's frozen grief swarmed into a rage that boiled inside his chest and then sought to find its release in a scream of disbelief and fury that threatened to erupt from his mouth. He bit his lip till it bled in an effort to contain it while his trembling hands moved Jackie's body away from his own.

Once his child's body was safe in Sam's care, he loosed the buzzing flight of rage and flung himself at Baal's retreating back; and allowed his wrath to explode in one word of negation and denial. "Noo!"

Baal shouted, "Stop!"

Jack's attack took the Goa'uld by surprise and the infuriated man took full advantage of it. With Baal knocked to the floor, Jack straddled him and raised his fist, then smashed it into the snake's nose with punishing force as years of pent-up rage and fury poured forth. Beneath him, the Goa'uld writhed and twitched as he tried to avoid Jack's fists.

The Warriors did not intervene, too well programmed to obey their master's every command, even those not intended for them. Their god was on his own.

Baal's nose flattened under the assault of first one fist, and then the other as blood spattered his handsome face. With metronome-like regularity, Jack's words were punctuated by his fists. "You . . . son . . . of . . . a . . . bitch!"

Blood sprayed Jack's face and he licked it off his lips, savoring the coppery taste of it, relishing it. Not because it was blood, but because of who's blood it was. It tasted of revenge - sweet and heady - one he'd yearned after for years. No longer would he deny himself of it, he had paid its price many times over.

"This one's for Jackie . . . this one's for her sisters . . . every . . . single . . . one."

"One and two and three . . ."

A distant part of his brain recognized the words and meaning of Sam's chant, her hope. It should have made sense to him, but the rage and sweet blood could not be resisted. They were Jack's preoccupation, his extraction of vengeance on the one snakehead that had plagued him, whom he believed had broken him years ago. And now Jack intended to break him in turn.

His words, still in time to his fisted blows, grew increasingly unintelligible as his already ravaged throat became hoarse with his shouted proclamation of Baal's every crime. Nevertheless, Jack knew what he said, he'd lived it and a part of him gloried in the freedom of voicing it at long last. Each declaration of every degradation and humiliation made him stronger, not weaker.

Jack's chest heaved from exertion and years of hidden anguish, slicked with sweat and blood, and for once it wasn't his own. He cocked his fist back and relived the last sin of Baal's power over him, the life he himself had taken to gain his freedom many years ago. Not an innocent, but a life nonetheless, and it was fitting that Baal experience the same end for himself.

The weight of every moment spent at the mercy of this wanna-be god fueled his fist as it descended, a dark angel flashing through the sudden brilliance that erupted around him, closely followed on Jack's shout, "And this one's for me!"

Ensnared by the light and sound he knew he should recognize - his fist slammed into . . . an empty floor? Distantly, his mind was aware that instead of the satisfaction of dying flesh under his blow, he felt the bones of his hand give way, but he dismissed all of this as unimportant. The most important thing now was to protect Jackie and Sam.

As if in a dream, he heard Sam's voice behind him, loud with urgency. "I need some help here. She's not breathing!"

"Jackie!" Jack's voice was so hoarse that her name was only a croak.

He staggered to his feet and lurched toward Sam who cradled the child - his daughter - in her arms. Jackie's pale thin face was tucked up against Sam's breast while her arms dangled at her side lifelessly.

Jack held out his hands to take her from Sam, but then saw the gore encrusting them and snatched them away. Although the blood was primarily Baal's it wasn't appropriate to touch a child with hands stained with blood. It had scared her before - back in the cell - and he'd promised her that he would protect her from harm. And now she was dead. Another promise broken - she had been right to distrust him.

Someone tried to push him away from his daughter and he lashed out with his hands. "Don't touch her. Just leave her alone," he snarled. "Haven't you done enough already?"

"But Jack . . ." Sam pleaded as she jerked away from Jack's side. "It's Thor . . . and Ernie. They can save her."

Jack blinked the sweat out of his eyes and looked around not really seeing where he was as he tried to make some sense of the situation. "What?"

His mind raced out of control .The last thing he'd known was that he'd been beating the crap out of Baal. What had happened to change that? Where was he now, and how had he gotten there?

"It's me, Jack. Ernie. I want to help," a short gray . . . Asgard? Yeah, that was it.

Jack opened his mouth and then closed it with a snap. His forehead wrinkled as he fought to halt his whirling brain, trying to catch onto something that might tell him who this creature was. "Ernie?"

The Asgard held out his hand in a silent plea of empathy. "Yes, Jack. It's me."

Jack nodded numbly as something deep within told him this was someone he could trust and stood aside, whereupon Ernie turned away from Jack and beckoned to Sam.

"Bring her here, Sam, and I'll get her hooked up to a medical pod." He gently steered Sam toward his goal and Jack shambled after.

"I tried giving her rescue breathing but I'm not sure it was enough. She was shot by a Kull Warrior - it was an accident. It was aiming for me and she got in the way," Sam explained as she laid Jackie in the pod. Then she straightened Jackie's arms along her body and bent down to kiss her on the forehead.

"Please, Ernie. Save her. She . . . she deserves to live," Sam pleaded with tear-filled eyes.

Ernie patted her arm and nodded. "Of course she does. I'll do the best I can."

Then he bent to his work and hurriedly began hooking Jackie's body up to the various ports and monitors contained in the medical pod.

A touch to Jack's elbow startled him. Baal and his carbon-copy Warriors loomed out of the chaos and jumble in his head; in reaction he flinched and rounded with a raised fist to hit whoever had dared to disturb him. His clenched hand screeched to a halt in mid-air when another image snapped into focus and he discerned the identity of his assailant.

"Thor?"

Thor's eyes widened and then he nodded. "You seem to be on edge, O'Neill. Would you come with me?"

"No, I can't. I need to stay with Jackie." Jack's attention had already returned to her still unmoving form.

"Who is Jackie?" Thor's voice was annoying and it was getting on Jack's last nerve.

"What?" He ran the fingers of one gore-encrusted hand through his hair, leaving reddened tufts standing at attention in its wake. "Oh, um. Jackie? She's my daughter."

"I was not aware that you had a daughter."

"For crying out loud, Thor, could you just leave me alone right now?" Jack snapped and then left Thor to stand shoulder-to-shoulder with Sam. This time he had a name for the creature across from him. Slowly his overloaded mind puzzled out that somehow help had arrived in the form of the Asgard. New hope raised a warmth in the ashes of his faith. Perhaps . . .

"Has Ernie said anything yet?" Jack asked her, while his hands clenched and unclenched at his side. He winced as the bones he'd shattered in his hand complained at the rough treatment. He flexed his fingers again and gloried in the shaft of pain that shot up his elbow.

Pain he could understand. They were old pals, buds, - comrades-in-arms as it were - and he deserved to suffer. For Jackie had shielded him from that last laser blast with her own body - and paid for her selfless act with her life - a price far too high for a soul as dark as his.

Another clench of his fist renewed the pain; his ally, a buttress against his raw emotions and a refuge from a nightmarish present that was too much for him to face. A new shield against older nightmares he refused to recognize, even though he knew them intimately.

"No, he hasn't. She looks so small and helpless just lying there, doesn't she?"

"Huh?" temporarily shaken from his own horrific thoughts, he raised shaking hands, looked at them blankly and then let them drop back down to his side as if he didn't know what to do with them. His head felt too small for the chaos and pounded in time with his heartbeat.

"Oh, yeah, she does," Jack licked his dry cracked lips and tasted a coppery tang of dried blood - not his own - but Baal's. It had felt so good to pound him into the floor, an ache of pleasure sharper than the mindless shiver of sexual climax bloomed at the remembrance of what he had done. Shame and elation warred amongst his many waking nightmares, making reality seem distant.

He flexed his fingers again and rejoiced at the jolt of liquid fire that raced up his arm to drown the hated and - at the same time desired - animalistic pleasure. His only anchor in the whirling chaos he found himself in. He studied his fist with numb detachment and noted the deformed knuckles surrounded by puffy bluish skin and wondered at how steady his hand seemed. Should it not be shaking?

"Please come with me," Thor's matter of fact tone broke into Jack's fevered thoughts and he jumped, fists cocked at hip level, ready for use. Sam gave him a worried look and he shied away from any contact with them. Dealing with the bedlam inside of his head took all he had; dealing with more was beyond his present capabilities.

"Why? I want to stay with Jackie, she'll be scared when she wakes up if I'm not there," Sam's tone was firm and unyielding as only a mother with a wounded chick could be.

"Eir will do everything within his power but your presence is distracting him," Thor sighed and blinked his large obsidian eyes - eyes that were a match for Jack's irredeemably fallen soul.

"Well, okay," Sam still sounded uncertain. "But you'll tell us as soon as there's news, won't you?"

"Of course I will," Ernie assured them as his head bobbed toward them and then his attention was back on his patient.

Thor led them to a corner with chairs that they all could use and Sam sank into one with a sigh of relief. Jack ignored the implied gesture of kindness and stood facing a seated Thor and Sam.

"Why don't you sit down, O'Neill?" Thor blinked up at him.

"I don't feel like sitting down, that's why!" Jack snapped back with his fisted hands now lowered to his side.

In response to his own unwarranted aggression and inner pain he tightened the broken one, the jolt of pain was welcome and reminded him of whom and what he was - a person undeserving of any respite or kindness. How tightly could he force his fist closed, how much pain would it take to wash this from his blackened soul?

"Jack, are you all right?" Sam looked worried and stood up.

"I'm fine." He flexed his hand again and stiffened as his nerve-endings screamed from the over-stimulation. "Just fine," he muttered.

She reached out a tentative hand to touch him and he cringed back. "Stop, don't touch me," he warned, his voice loud with anger and self-loathing.

"O'Neill, is there a problem? You appear to be hurt." Thor's voice sounded calm - soothing even - but Jack was having none of it. He knew he didn't deserve any acts of compassion and sought refuge in another jolt of pain. If the God of his childhood had abandoned him, why shouldn't everyone else? Obviously, he was beyond help, his soul already consigned to the everlasting fires of hell for his transgressions.

"Why don't you mind your own business?" Jack snapped and backed away from them . . . and then stopped when he felt a bulkhead against his back. His head felt as if it would explode at any second. "Just stay away from me - all of you!" He knew beyond the shadow of a doubt, that to know and touch him would be fatal - for those who loved him . . . died.

Sam's eyes were wide, her blue irises all but hidden by her dilated black pupils as she inched toward him, her hands outreached. "Jack? Let me help you."

Jack licked his lips. Was that fear in her eyes? She should fear and despise him, for had his own daughter not just died in his place? Had he not been derelict and replayed the scene of his son's death before her? He shook his head, unwilling to allow more death because of him. The unbearable pressure in his skull increased and he thumped his head back against the wall at his back. "No, I can't . . . you can't . . ."

When he felt a sudden touch against his arm he tried to swat it away with the other hand. His fingers met resistance and he looked down and saw another Asgard at his side.

"What?"

"You are injured and need to rest, O'Neill," admonished Thor with undeserved gentleness.

"No," Jack's voice wavered as his legs turned to rubber.

Deliberately he banged his broken hand back against the wall, the pain flickered and died. His anchor gone, his body slid against the bulkhead on its way to the floor. No matter how badly he desired it, the cleansing pain would not reawaken; he blinked and realized the world had canted to one side.

He fought the darkness that beckoned to him, but it was stronger, and he had no weapon left. Heavy waves of the horrific chaos that polished the inside of his skull washed over Jack and sucked him down to that deep place he referred to as 'the box'. Coming to rest in the gory bones of his own past, his vision grayed at the edges and his breaths became useless shuddering gasps.

"No," he whispered.


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